Wasting

[colombiangirl1]

Maybe
You can tell
From this poem
Right now
That I'm feeling
Down
It will quickly pass
I hope
Maybe
It won't hang on
this time
And I'll be okay
Tomorrow
Instead of
Another time
I feel as though
I'm wasting
My words
wasting
My effort
Wasting
My time
Wasting
By laying out
These feelings
of mine
Maybe
I won't say
Anymore
Because
It's not helping
anyway
The people I love
Are still
So far
Away
I have such
A great
pain
My heart
Is sorrowful
A few pieces
Are missing
My daughter
My niece
And others too
I'm forgotten
I
am here
But no one
Is near
And I'm really feeling
The tears
Can anyone
Understand this?
Or am I writing
To myself
Once again?
(written-3/08/07-for everyone I miss everyday-)

[Idealist]

I understand it, Cgirl. I'm very sorry you're feeling so sad and alone tonight. It's a beautiful poem, though, and I enjoyed it. I hope your feelings pick up real soon! :)

Idealist