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colombiangirl1
03-16-2007, 10:16 AM
This one I wrote at work the other day...

Here is a picture of me
When I was fifteen
When I was the beauty queen
Looking for SOMETHING...
That's LOST today...
Looking for SOMEONE...
I LOST along the way...




Burntmarshmallow
03-16-2007, 03:31 PM
hi ya cgilr I really liked this one. Sounds like you were writing about me .
makes me want to write a poem about lost and found . sometimes it seems like a circle of lost and found then lost again... Kinda like when the sun is hiddng behind a cloud . . . you cant wait for the cloud to melt away and you can feel the sunshine. You know I hope you find all the things you are seeking and looking for , including the ones that that were lost along the way.
:hug: Thanks for sharing and for inspiring me to do a lost and found poem of my own. :) . one more thing cgirl..Have a sunny stress free Fun weekend !!!
You so deservet it!
Peace
BMW

Visitor
03-18-2007, 01:03 AM
This one really reaches deep, Cgirl. So few words, but such a tremendous message...I love it.

colombiangirl1
03-18-2007, 05:27 PM
Thanks Visitor,
So glad you liked it. So glad someone got it. I know you did, because I talk to you alot, and you know a little of the history behind this poem. Thanks again...

-Cgirl-