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paula_w
03-10-2008, 07:39 PM
This looks ambitious....I like the preview of it.

http://www.marketwire.com/mw/release.do?id=830540

Looks like someone has gone to a lot of trouble.

paula




reverett123
03-10-2008, 11:09 PM
You are right, Paula. It really does look like they went to one heck of a lot of trouble. But in reading just the first three or four paragraphs I ran across a half dozen cases of poor writing and general sloppiness. For a company to spend that much time and money to convince investors to buy their work and then to be too cheap to run it past a good copy editor is down right sad. Being married to a merciless one who has gently savaged some of my best makes me sensitive I guess....:D

chasmo
03-11-2008, 10:08 AM
I wonder if anyone at Amgen reads this....

"thus Neurotrophic growth factors (NGF), either to be injected directly into the brain are also tipped for potential market success."