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~KELLWANTSANSWERS~
10-29-2006, 03:47 PM
I wrote this a few months ago when i was having a really bad day!
THE SUN SHINES BRIGHT-BUT I JUST DONT FEEL RIGHT.
THE RAIN MAY FALL-SOMETIMES I THINK I HEAR GODS CALL.
YET I WONT GIVE IN TO IT ALL!! I WONT GIVE UP THIS FIGHT..EVEN THOUGH
SOMETIMES I THINK I MIGHT!!
THE PAIN MAKES ME FEEL LIKE A PRISONER!!I CALL OUT AND NO-ONE HEARS!
SOMEBODY ,PLEASE HELP ME MAKE IT DISSAPPEAR!!!
THIS MONSTER SEEMS TO GROW BIGGER EACH YEAR!!
I AM LIVING IN FEAR!!!
I CALL OUT AND NO-ONE CAN HEAR~
Alffe
10-29-2006, 04:23 PM
I think writing poetry is a great way to explore our feelings...especially when we are having those "bad days". I used to write the scariest poetry...filled with black bile...LOL...today I don't even like to remember how badly I felt but I still recommend it .....get those feelings out...dig deep..it helps!! (((Kell)))
mama sue
10-29-2006, 07:41 PM
{{{HUGS}}}
I hope you know that someone DOES care.
Chemar
10-30-2006, 09:53 AM
we sure care Kell:o and hear the cry of your heart in those words.
writing the feelings down sure is therapy in its own way.
I hope the monster shrivels and things just get better and brighter for you
thank you for sharing with us
((((Kell))))
Idealist
10-30-2006, 01:53 PM
That was good, Kell. Really. Because it was so expressive! I don't know how I missed seeing it earlier, but I'm glad I saw it today...:)
I didn't know you wrote poetry. Let's hear some more...:D
You KNOW there are people who do listen to you, and care. But I know it's hard to remember it sometimes. Just don't ever forget it for too long, okay?
Idealist
~KELLWANTSANSWERS~
11-01-2006, 10:00 PM
I am ok.I wrote this a couple of months ago..
Even though i still have no answers for myself.I ,for now have come to a more accepting place with it all...
I used to write alot when i was younger.My girl is always telling me i should pick up a pen and give it try,so that day i did.
It warmed my heart to read these replies:)
Thanx everyone:)
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