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Old 10-25-2009, 05:50 PM   #1
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Colorful leaves everywhere
on the ground or,
up in the trees,
hoping against hope
to stay
come rain or high winds.

The trees need a rest -
shutting down -
dropping, one by one,
gold, red, yellow leaves.
Retreating into the trunk and limbs
to survive the winter.


Your turn now.
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Old 10-26-2009, 07:28 AM   #2
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It's ok
but maybe not.

Pipes can leak
and that's a good thing.

Our clocks turn back
is it supper time?
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Drip, drip, drip
that is not a good thing

Trip, trip, trip
and here comes the fall!

Tic, tic, tic
supper time will wait

Tap, tap, tap
Methinks I saw a bat

Vroom..vrom ...vrom
That was a witch on a broom

Wait, wait, wait
She is going to be late

The Express lane is only for two
But only one witch per broom

The witch is going to be late
for her meeting with her date
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You win! LOL...just kidding
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I win! I win!
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Winning isn't everything....
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